Teacher Feedback

Akilah you have made some progress in showing evidence of your work in progress. You should add commentary to explain how the works has developed i.e. what you did to improve the work / achieve a particular effect etc. This is something that I'm sure you will aim to do as you and your group continue to edit the video and finalise the ancillary work.

editing- working progress

video shooting

Today tyrone and i went to virginia waters to do some shooting allowing us to obtain most of the video footage. It was a very successful day as aswell as creating a good setting for the video, we managed to seek out good shooting locations within virgina waters. There was an area where a narrow path led about a 30 feet away from some stone steps which were covered in shubbery. This fit into the concept of our video as it created a sense that the performer was lost in search for something... almost alice in wonderland like.

Ancillary task magazine poster

Teacher Feedback

Akilah, your previous target still remains to be met. Please attend to this asap and i would suggest showing evidence of work in progress using power point and then upload to your blog using slideshare.